Originally Posted on Tumblr on Dec 24th, 2017
(Reupload notes: I'll probably give it another go sometime.)
Looking at the blowjob set I drew of August, I probably could’ve executed Frame 6 better.
First off, the ejaculate doesn’t trail from August’s mouth as it appropriately should; though there are traces of it on her lower jaw, it overall looks like the semen was poured onto the dick rather than immersed in her throat. I should’ve left a trail of it leading from the tongue to make the implication much clearer.
Second, I took another look at her face and realized that I had not lowered her birthmark back down. In Frame 1, I had raised it to stretch back in conjunction with her smile. She adopts an open mouth gesture in Frame 6, but I had forgotten to lower it back down in response.
There’s also the stomach of the POV male. There is a noticeable clip in the erased edge; I had failed to smooth it out like the other Frames. There are also spots that I failed to erase on the lower left corners of Frames 2, 3, and 5, though honestly, I’m not particularly inclined to gripe too much about them–each Frame was a workstation unto itself, so I am not too fretful over their border discrepancies. Even still, though.
Not really something of relevance, just some thoughts I wanted to share. Overall, I still think it came out pretty good. Also, the Christmas pic is coming along as scheduled. I’m in the middle of shading, and the background will be simplistic. I’ll be able to hit tonight’s deadline easy.